Her Dark Winter Eyes ~*ROTD*~
Her Dark Winter EyesA drunkard’s waltz for the agesCome ye lucky gentlemenOf the capitalist crusadeDrink deep the heartacheFrom the well of womanPour your cup for a last sipAs night falls into...
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Sometimes a concubine trades a heart of gold for the cold hard facts, and a chip in the game. And some are never heard from again. Sorry John, I was listening to Mary Jo gurgling as I was reading...
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Much gratitude my friend for your fantastic take on this poem. Indeed when hungry a soul can be sold like a wedding ring. To hock or not to hock. Often the choice doesn't seem as cut and dry as it...
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I was so mesmerized and loved the way it winded down and ended.. sigh.. great~~ Ave
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Thank you my friend. Glad you enjoyed my vision here. I appreciate your sigh very much. ;-) Hugs, John
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John, I was awestruck and spellbound by your beautiful work with its captivating conclusion. Gifted work, my friend.
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goldenmyst ,what a grand and outstanding metaphoric look at captialism .. .. loved it !!! Rob
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Michael I am humbled and grateful to know this piece left that impression with you. Thank you my friend for reading and feeling this piece. Rob, this piece kind of wrote itself. I was listening to...
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excellent piece makes me think of Shakespeare's Dark Lady!
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Willow I just learned of his Dark Lady a few months ago. According to my friend she really did a number on Shakespeare. Thanks for reading and your great comment my friend. :) John
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This is Outstanding Poet-John!Clever, with lot's of metaphor-magic to go around.I love that title too.Well done..Hugs,Sky
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Thanks Sky. Glad you enjoyed my meandering metaphors here. Good to know my stream of consciousness was felt by you. ;-) Hugs, John
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Thanks so much Jan! Glad you enjoyed reading from the river of my dreams. ;-) Hugs, John
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Fine work, John, this being an example of outstanding poetic prowess.
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You truly write on a level of your own. HAVE you ever written a "bad poem?" You never disappoint.
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I like the title you selected for this excellent poem, and also the image of the dark eyes on the accompanying video. You have a wonderful gift for writing, John. Your words bring many images to...
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Thanks Michael my friend. Glad you enjoyed this whimsical piece of mine. whatup64106, I thank you greatly my friend. I have written my share of bad poems. I appreciate your commendation. Thank you...
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~John~As always a wonderful read from your pen dear friend =) Most enjoyed from the first line until the last ~ You are a wiz with words for sure!!Huggerz
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Poet in Pink you enamor me with your enchanting words. And you smile illuminates the page with the sun of love. I love you're signature pic and avatar. You beam affection in waves of beauty. ;-) Hugs,...
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